Which is an example of a complete thesis statement?
Yes! A good thesis statement will present your argument and detail the evidence you will use to support it. In this case 'Human activity has had a negative impact on the environment' is the argument. Note that a good argument takes a stance on a topic. Finally, a good thesis statement should also include the 2 or 3 pieces of evidence that will support your stance; in this case, the evidence is 'Because it has caused deforestation, ocean acidification, and the extinction of important biodiversity.' Read on for another quiz question.
Not quite! This thesis statement is not complete. It presents a topic and a stance on that topic, but it does not give the evidence that you will use to support your argument. Remember to include brief notes about why your stance is correct or how you will support it. Try another answer...
Almost! This thesis statement tells the reader what the paper will discuss. However, it lays out this supporting evidence without stating why that evidence is important. In other words, this statement does not say what stand the paper will take or what conclusions it will draw. Pick another answer!
Close! This thesis statement tries to pack too much information into a sentence or 2. Instead of trying to tell your reader all of your points in the thesis, simply tell them your argument and the evidence that you will use to support it. Remember, you have the rest of the paper to explain your argument! You might restructure this thesis to look something like, "Global warming is a major problem which humans have caused through irresponsible and unsustainable practices." Pick another answer!
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Part 2 of 3:
Writing Your Paper
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Develop your introduction. Think of your paper as a sandwich--the introduction is the first piece of bread. In the first paragraph, the reader's attention should be grabbed and your thesis made.[6]XResearch source
Introduce the topic in which you will be talking about. Start with a relevant quotation, intriguing question, or by addressing the counterargument.
Make sure that your thesis statement is clearly stated and leads into your paper. The reader should have a fairly good idea by the end of this first paragraph what they are about to be a part of.
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Build the body. This is the "meat" of the sandwich: the part where the true argument and taste of your paper lies. It should be three paragraphs long, all addressing a different, yet related, point.[7]XResearch source
Make sure each point is logically sound and adds weight to your thesis. A topic sentence (generally the first sentence, but not always) should clearly say what this point is. Then, introduce your first piece of evidence, followed by 1-3 sentences that connect your evidence back to your thesis. Explain how your evidence supports your points. Next, introduce your next piece of evidence for that point.
In most cases, you'll have at least 2 pieces of evidence for each point, but you may have more in a longer paper.
Follow the same format for each paragraph. The spotlight should dote on each point separately, allowing you time to argue in favor of it. How does it relate to your thesis? Are you leaving anything out?
Three paragraphs is standard for the traditional 5-paragraph paper. If your paper is longer, support your points as need be.
If your points aren't all equally strong, sandwich your weakest point in the middle.
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End with a strong conclusion. This is the "bottom bun," the last paragraph in your paper. All you need to do in this paragraph is bring your paper to a close, restate what you have already mentioned in the opening statement, and leave the reader feeling satisfied.
End on a memorable thought, quotation, or call to action. Or, if your paper calls for it, allude to the consequences of your thesis if left unaddressed. What should the reader walk away thinking or wanting to do?
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Part 4 Quiz
What is a correct way to structure a body paragraph?
Try again! A good body paragraph will present evidence to support the topic sentence and will analyze it immediately after. Splitting your evidence and your analysis will confuse the reader. Try another answer...
That's right! This is 1 correct way to structure a body paragraph. Remember that you can play with the placement of your topic sentence. The vast majority of the time, however, it is the first sentence. In addition, remember that every piece of evidence should be paired immediately after with an analysis of that evidence. A good body paragraph will have at least 2 and ideally 3 pairs of evidence-analysis. Read on for another quiz question.
Not quite! While it is acceptable to play with the placement of your topic sentence, this structure is missing several key features. Make sure you do not present any new evidence without analysing it. In other words, every evidence should be paired with an analysis. In addition, a strong body paragraph will have at least 3 pairs of evidence and analysis. Click on another answer to find the right one...
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Following General Guidelines
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Know what your teaching is looking for. They've probably said it in class 5 different times, but if anything is foggy, ask.
Do they want your paper in MLA or APA format?
Are they a stickler for third person?
What's their take on page numbers and margins?
How many sources do they require? Are there sources that are unacceptable?
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Check for grammar and content errors. You've been going over this paper for so long it may be difficult to truly see it in all its glory. Take a break for a bit, go back, and read it twice.
It's a good idea to get someone else to go over it for you. Your writing may be clear to you but difficult to understand for someone else. What's more, have them go over punctuation and grammar as well--you may have read it so many times you stopped noticing.
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Use transitions. An easy way to make your paper flow is to incorporate transitions even within points. Show the logical connections between your ideas.
Transitions make it clear that one paragraph flows into the other. What's more, your topic sentences should ease into the evidence effortlessly.[8]X Trustworthy Source University of North Carolina Writing CenterUNC's on-campus and online instructional service that provides assistance to students, faculty, and others during the writing process Go to source
There are dozens to choose from, but here is a short list: in the first place, comparatively, likewise, coupled with, in addition, in the light of, by the same token, etc.
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Write in the third-person present tense. Though once in a while a certain teacher will tell you it's appropriate not to, the majority of papers should be written in present day third-person. This means never using the word "I."
Use the present tense regardless of the time period you are referring to. Your paper is making a point that is relevant now. Instead of, "Ralph and Piggy struggled for order and democracy," it should be, "Ralph and Piggy struggle for order and democracy."[9]XResearch source
If you feel weight could be added to your argument by using "I" statements, ask your teacher if he/she is okay with it. They very well may be.
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Do not summarize or plagiarize. The first will result in a fail and the second will result in a fail. Whatever you do, avoid these two things.
A paper that summarizes is not your own work. Your teacher is looking for something coming from you--some idea that would not be found in another reader. Because of that, you cannot (within reason) be wrong. Stand by your opinion and use it to create a unique thesis all your own.
If you plagiarize, your teacher will know. Each person writes differently and your paper will be interrupted by the change of style. If you're thinking about plagiarizing the entire thing, know that all teachers have access to sources that identify this in addition to being able to recognize when it's not your style of writing.
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Part 5 Quiz
Which is a well edited sentence?
Not quite! Remember that most teachers prefer to talk about the text in the present tense. Instead, try, 'In 'Atonement,' Briony attempts to make up for her mistake.' Try again...
Almost! This is a strong statement but you should avoid the use of the first-person point of view. Instead, try simply 'Briony is punishing herself for the death of her sister's lover in 'Atonement.' Try again...
Yes! While you can write as simply or as complexly as you please, there are a few basic guidelines that most teachers want to see. Try to write about the text in the present tense. Use the third-person point of view. Finally, make sure the grammar is correct! Good luck! Read on for another quiz question.